Phenomenal Fin part 1.

Jack hawk

Australia

age: 10

part: 1

Fin was a dull kid if it came to studies. There was only one thing he was good at, it's a game called "mortal combo." the story in the game is that you and the villain are stuck on a train with the driver being dead. You have to kill a gang of three, The Villian, his giant pet spider, and an eight-legged horse with fire coming out its mouth named Hoctopus.

One day when fin had been playing for 4 hours straight and almost beat the Hoctopus. That's when eight giant hands, about 6 feet long, came out of his computers and caught fins hed with their tentacles.

He couldn't believe it. He was sucked into the game. The scary part was that he was on the roof of a moving train and almost gonna hit a tunnel. He ducked in time. when he got up, he saw something which made him breathless, it was hoctopus....................

Did you like part 1?

part, 2 coming soon.

tags: series, action, adventure, thriller, fun